Te Kauru 2018 -(Writing 2nd Draft)
Scorpion kart
- time with friends waiting in line😃
most funniest ride ever😎
scariest ride at rainbows end the fear fall 10 seconds going up 5 seconds at the top 2 seconds going down wow😖
With fear and excitement entering Rainbows End running toward scorpion karts.
A worker started the motors clank crick ZOOM!
Mrs Windleborn in the lend Rhaven just on her tail,
but I just race right passed Rhaven “Woohoo!” Brylee’s kart stopped like 8 or 9 times. BANG! “Oops, sorry Rhaven I didn’t know we don’t lound bumping” I said. “Yeah right.” After going around 8 time non stop a red light flickers right in front of me all of us stopped the man said “Come back to the start!” I follow Mrs Windleborn with Rhaven and Brylee behind me. CRRRRRR CLANK BOOM! “sorry guys” “KEIRA”! Off we go running towards the FEARFALL dun, dun dunnnnnn.
A worker started the motors clank crick ZOOM!
Mrs Windleborn in the lend Rhaven just on her tail,
but I just race right passed Rhaven “Woohoo!” Brylee’s kart stopped like 8 or 9 times. BANG! “Oops, sorry Rhaven I didn’t know we don’t lound bumping” I said. “Yeah right.” After going around 8 time non stop a red light flickers right in front of me all of us stopped the man said “Come back to the start!” I follow Mrs Windleborn with Rhaven and Brylee behind me. CRRRRRR CLANK BOOM! “sorry guys” “KEIRA”! Off we go running towards the FEARFALL dun, dun dunnnnnn.
Nice work kiera! I really enjoyed reading this writing! What was your favourite ride at rainbows end?? I really liked your reaction when I saw you get off the ride :3 Next time maybe make your sentences make sense.
ReplyDeletenice photo of me and you please carry on posting your fabulous writing and pictures :)
ReplyDeletethank you brylee and hamarni my favourite ride was the invader
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